Organizing and cataloging my books the other day, I found one of my old journalism textbooks. Feeling nostalgic, I dusted off the cover. It was The Word: An Associated Press Guide to Good News Writing. One of my favorite reads!
But it didn't occur to me until today that The Word should also be the standard by which public relations professionals follow for good writing. I am going as far to say it should be a must-read for anyone writing for public consumption. That includes bloggers who identify as citizen journalists, or bloggers writing on behalf of a corporation or client.
During our Hoosier PRSA annual Meet the Media and Half Day with a Pro luncheon, one of the journalists mentioned that writing news was key to getting coverage in his paper. Publicity just won't due.
As a former journalist, I could relate. Here's three points you might have forgotten but should always keep on the top of your mind.
Quotes: "News, to a remarkable degree, is what people say and how they say it -- as actors in events, kibitzers, witnesses, informants, as movers and shakers, and as the moved and the shaken."
Points to remember:
- Write so that quotes sound conversational, like real people uttered the words.
- Collect quotes from your clients. Interview them just like a reporter would.
- Weave quotes seamlessly into your news release so that it reads like a news story.
Tone: "Tone ultimately determines whether your reader is pleased or not. Sentence structure has something to do with it, but tone is primarily generated by the choice of words. Plain, short, familiar words produce one distinct tone; fancy polysyllables another.
Points to remember:
- Read allow what you write. Does it sound conversational? Do you hear rhythm?
- Choose the familiar words over the abstract ones.
- Put your verbs to work.
Leads: "A good lead makes a clear statement of the essential news point and when possible includes a detail that distinguishes the story from others of its kind."
Points to remember:
- You lead should be your pitch to journalists. Especially focus on "a detail that distinguishes [your] story from others of its kind."
- Make you lead newsworthy.
- Try to write it in no more than 140 characters. (For you social media PR-types like me, you know why this is true.) Journalists are going online too. And some like being pitched through Twitter.




